Enhance Charity Donations by improving EventBrite / JustGiving postings

  • Estado: Closed
  • Premio: $40
  • Propuestas recibidas: 14
  • Ganador: louiscam

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Hello!
I feel this will be a swift and easy contest. Truth be told, we should have done a contest in the first place, instead of a bunch of engineers and doctors trying to write compelling content! #LessonLearned!

I belong to a philanthropic organisation called the HRF (Human Race Foundation). We’re a small group, and support charities during our biennial charity ball. The next ball is on Saturday, 17th February; it’s an invitation only event.

The problem to solve is:
1. The EventBrite posting is a bit dull! Talks too much about who we are as opposed to the excellent charitable goal we’re trying to achieve and the fun we will have in the process!
2. The JustGiving post is even worse; we’re marketing tickets instead of requesting that people support the cause so we can achieve our target! No wonder we’re only at 5% donation target!! The donation page should be all about the cause!

So, this contest is about doing a quick re-write to make the posts better.

Keywords to help your thinking: elegance, class, MayFair (cool affluent area of London), donations, giving generously, dancing until the early hours.

* EventBrite link: https://www.eventbrite.co.uk/e/human-race-foundation-charity-ball-tickets-40981534874
* Donation link: https://www.justgiving.com/fundraising/hrf-dinner-2018
* Cause were supporting: http://www.sicklecellsociety.org/

PS Will definitely work again with the winner!

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“Great job! Out of 21 submissions, I narrowed it down to three excellent entries. I chose Louis C. as the overall winner as the language was punchy with call to actions to encourage ticket sales and fundraising; all under a tight budget as we're a charity! Very happy with the Louis C. and Freelancer.com for making it happen!”

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  • DIPAKGOSWAMI
    DIPAKGOSWAMI
    • 6 años atrás

    It is a surprise you don't even read the message. I write for an NGO headed by 20 billion group. I attached the samples for you. Why can't you judge based on that? Are you not educated? If you can't acknowledge the talent, you have no right to comment. The star rating you are giving to others can not even come closer to my writing. It is very sad to people like you using this platform.

    • 6 años atrás
    1. JohnAeris
      Organizador del concurso
      • 6 años atrás

      Hahaha!
      Well this is amusing! :)

      Dipak G. you sent me an entry with 7 samples of previous works none of which are relevant to this small contest!

      So, shall I consider those individuals that are “delivering” or those individuals that spend 5 seconds copy and pasting to do "marketing?"

      Perhaps take the time to READ what is required of a Freelancer contest before sending silly messages; they make you look unprofessional.

      Thanks for the laughs though!

      Have a great day! :D

      • 6 años atrás
  • JohnAeris
    Organizador del concurso
    • 6 años atrás

    MORE INFO II


    AUDIENCE: members of the HRF all graduated from the same university. As such, we’re comprised of doctors, lawyers, engineers, consultants, entrepreneurs, tech wizards and the like. The guests is also comprised of these professionals, so there’s great networking to be had with like-minded folks that want to make a difference in their community and humanity. Guests will be aged between 33 – 50 and a lot will be married / have a partner and finished “partying” in their 20s! Folks in the late 30s and older are looking for more smooth sophistication and less “raving!”

    • 6 años atrás
  • JohnAeris
    Organizador del concurso
    • 6 años atrás

    MORE INFO:

    CALL TO ACTION on JustGiving Page: Please focus on encouraging donations on the just giving page; background is great, but, the focus is to donate and donate generously (though no amount is too small). £1000 isn’t really that big of a target, however, I feel that the wording is discouraging people; hence this context.

    VENUE: The Mayfair hotel is in a chic and very affluent area of London; it's also a 5-star hotel if this helps. The event is a black-tie ball that is invitation only.
    Keywords: Elegance, sophistication, exquisite, classic, luxurious, finesse, poise, grace, exclusive, swank, stylish, trendy, chichi, sharp, smart, networking,

    • 6 años atrás
  • stilldrift
    stilldrift
    • 6 años atrás

    Please check entry #14

    • 6 años atrás
  • stilldrift
    stilldrift
    • 6 años atrás

    Working on it

    • 6 años atrás
  • vraghavendran
    vraghavendran
    • 6 años atrás

    #increaseprize I will be posting the content in a while. Working on it. Thanks

    • 6 años atrás
    1. JohnAeris
      Organizador del concurso
      • 6 años atrás

      Hahah! Would love to increase prize... but, we're a charity supporting other charities and funds are low.

      • 6 años atrás
    2. vraghavendran
      vraghavendran
      • 6 años atrás

      Hey, I went through the websites. Love the work. It opens your eyes to so many real issues the world's facing today. I'd be glad if I had had the opportunity to contribute to it in the way of writing, Appreciate the effort. A shout out to HRF

      • 6 años atrás
  • JohnAeris
    Organizador del concurso
    • 6 años atrás

    5. We're seeking an emotional pull to help possible donors connect with the cause and part with their cash to help us hit our donation target. Whilst it's a fun, glamorous event, we're also raising funds to help those that cannot help themselves... especially as Sickle Cell Disease impacts mostly tropical countries, and those areas with Malaria i.e. Africa.

    • 6 años atrás
  • JohnAeris
    Organizador del concurso
    • 6 años atrás

    CLARIFICATION
    1. We raise funds, via donations, raffles and other games and fun activities on the day of the dinner. Furthermore, the JustGiving page is a central location for receiving additional donations over and above those raised on the day of the dinner
    2. Sickle Cell Society, may be London based, however, Sickle Cell is a global problem that predominantly impacts people of colour (mostly of African descent), as an organisation with African roots, this is one of the reasons we support this cause... as not many others do.
    3. 2 out every 100 children are born with sickle cell in Nigeria. Considering Nigeria had 6 million births in 2017 that's about 300,000 children born with Sickle Cell Disease - I got the stats here: http://www.sicklecellfoundation.com/sickle-cell/what-is-sickle-cell-disorder/

    4. HRF has been around for 35 years now

    • 6 años atrás

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