Re write sales copy

Hi There Please see the attached sales copy in the following link: [login to view URL] The order of the pictures can be see in the word document attached *order of sales copy', this is the order of the letter in case there is confusion. 1 Please can you re-write this in Microsoft Word and it should be written WORD FOR WORD with one exception: 2 Where there are claims that I supply millionaires or that I know someone that made 1 million pounds, it needs to be changed so it appears as that I am well connected but not actually make that claim. Or where I claim I have done this and am already making money, this needs to be changed to show this is an aspiration of mine and by working together we will build the relationship and business For example, on the front page there is a quote 'Here's what just one UK husband and wife couple banked from the simple little one page automated website and niche DVD set I supplied them with' This should be turned into: 'Here is what just one UK husband and wife couple banked from a simple little one page AUTOMATED Website and niche DVD set that I can make available to you...' Or on page 3 'And of course I know the millionaires doing this right now as I write to you because I not only write the products...' Should be: 'These products are being used by millionaires right now and I’ve been able to gain insights and connections that help me understand what products really work at any point in time. OR SOMETHING BETTER! No pictures are required , just leave a space for where a picture was. As a test please can you rewrite page 3 for me to review? Also let me know a cost and when you can do this we can take the next step.