I am the Editor-in-Chief of several US online newspapers and I help writers improve their stories and press releases every day, by proofreading, rewriting and restructuring. This helps to get their message across and makes them look good.
I'd love to help you and make your PR the best it can be to attract the attention you want.
I've been doing press releases for events and marketing campaigns for a while now. The rate of my press releases being published to the media is high as I've worked closely with big media outlets in Manila for the past 2 years. I know what the media is looking for in a PR, and what they would not need to see in it.